Cheeky ASD

It's an older work of mine, but it's the first that I submit^^ ...so I want to hear your feedback ... yeah okey it's a pity that I don't colorized it... shame on me Dx
If you see any mistakes (in the pic not in the text ) mark pls say it or download the picture, mark the mistake(s) and send it back to me^^.
Thanks for watching and revising

Ahhh before I forget to say it:
The girl in the picture is the main character of the manga "cheeky vampire" (a bit ad for it ). I think this is a typical shojo-manga... (again shame on me *hurting shame* aah pain >.<... about a vampire girl ,Maaka Karin , who don't drink blood but inject blood... how she do this?... if you really interested in -> read the manga or ask me^^